I really like how you have found an example to help you create your own Lapita pottery. Just remember the writing is just as important as the creation. We would like to see you adding detail when you are writing about your book buzz activity. For example you could tell us why you chose this activity, why it was hard or easy and how this activity relates to our story.
nice work jessie I realy like it how you have explained how you made it by saying you have used polie line and have desighned it by paying good attenchine to the real one and makeing them similer. I think its really good but need to write a bit more about it so it gives people a bit more info of how you did it and what web stite and why you did it.
I really like how you have found an example to help you create your own Lapita pottery. Just remember the writing is just as important as the creation. We would like to see you adding detail when you are writing about your book buzz activity. For example you could tell us why you chose this activity, why it was hard or easy and how this activity relates to our story.
ReplyDeletenice work jessie I realy like it how you have explained how you made it by saying you have used polie line and have desighned it by paying good attenchine to the real one and makeing them similer. I think its really good but need to write a bit more about it so it gives people a bit more info of how you did it and what web stite and why you did it.
ReplyDeletethank's for the advice lily I appreciate it.
DeleteI like how you got it the right shape.
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